Thursday 11 September 2014

I have been learning to write complete sentences, add details, and change the beginnings of my sentences. This is a story about Goldilocks

One sunny day I was lost in the woods. Then I saw a house. I ran up to the door and said “Is

anyone home?” No one was home but when I went to the door and I c bat e the bowl and then i went on the big.

and it was to the and i the bat it was and i cra the she was on the chr and it brk and she run up the bed it was. to the for me and i went to the bed. i the bed it was jar and the little bars came home.

Mrs spicer looked out the window and screamed when she sat an enormous moster crossing the road. it slithered into the spooky dark water.

it was the Loch Ness monster. she looks like a big fat dinosaur. Her

neck is long like giraffe and her

tail is long like a snake.

ln the mon we went to the Science show my fant pest was the rawest. it was the coo pest basenit it went sheet itre vast and we had to. go basser to.

ln the mon we went to the Science show my fant pest was the rawest. it was the coo pest basenit it went sheet itre vast and we had to. go basser to.